雅思剑桥14中,有关于动物园场景的文章,可以积累起来,用于关于动物园话题的写作,比如:
Many people believe that zoos should be closed because it is cruel to keep animals locked up. Moreover, zoos do not play a positive role in society. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think zoos are cruel and the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
这篇文章总的来说是说动物园的各种好:
吃得好 - Animals in good zoos get a varied and high-quality diet with all the supplements required,
医疗保障好 - any illnesses they might have will be treated.
住得好 - they have a safe environment in which to live, and they are spared bullying and social ostracism by others of their kind. They do not suffer from the threat or stress of predators, or the irritation and pain of parasites or injuries.
活得好 - The average captive animal will have a greater life expectancy compared with its wild counterpart, and will not die of drought, of starvation or in the jaws of a predator.
同时,这篇文章的文章结构,尤其是衔接方面,非常值得我们学习。使用到了firstly, also, in addition to this, 来作为段落之间的衔接。

最后,这篇文章的论证手法也是值得我们学习的。我们来一起看两个例子。
While it is true that ..., ... 尽管事实是……,但是……
论证注重细节,有各种具体的细节进行支撑动物园的教育意义。我们平时在写作的过程中也是需要注重细节信息支撑的。

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